Ok, we’re back! I’m going to lie here and say that we got some complaints (even though you guys won’t comment!) on the fact that you would need MS Word to view the reviews, so I made it so that you won’t! The text of the reviews (or at least most of the text) will be posted directly to the site. A short preview and a link to the full text of that specific review will be on the word file. The links to the full texts will also be posted onto the site (don’t worry you’ll be able to read it in-browser on the site) an example of what I’m trying to do is here at My plot review of SSBB. As you can see you won’t need anything special to view the reviews (oh and by the way, my review is the only one up right now, so don’t go looking for everyone else’s reviews; they haven’t sent them to me yet)

-Kendrick 
They call me Hybrid Misfit
3/3/2010 09:47:08 am

Your review style needs some work. You simply mention all the issues you have with the main story BY NAME you shouldn't mention any major plot points or even any plot points at all. Instead of running them off on a list, point them out simply state the game has an issue with plot elements and that some of them are poorly executed. you even make mention of the final boss by name, anyone who hasn't played the game wouldn't know who that is now would they? just say they final battle is more difficult than it should be on any setting. I think if you hadn't mentioned everything by name and then describing it they you would have the backbone for an at least decent review...hope this helps

Sincerely

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3/3/2010 09:59:31 am

plot reviews (at least ones i've seen) normally contain spoilers of the kind i have in my review.
you also have to remember that the this is JUST the plot review and i had come up with alot for MY PART. so yeah, !!SPOILER WARNING!!

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They call me Hybrid Misfit
3/3/2010 10:09:08 am

Well then you've been reading some bad reviews, and for that I won't fault you, there are mountains of bad reviewers out there...All I'm saying is try this

http://thewiire.com/reviews/post/1344-super-smash-bros-brawl?showall=1

far more long winded then what you've stated you want to accomplish but the style is top notch and it give a little taste without giving to much

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